Some people prefer to send their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Make changes, or preserve the daily routine has become an interesting topic among psychologists. Many people, elderlies to be precise, have a tendency to prevent changes in their life for some reasons while others believe change often bring positive ramification in one's life.
Those who prefer the routine lifestyle argue that changes do not always have desirable consequences. In addition, they believe that life should follow by an exact rule without any distraction which may peril their stability and happiness. For examples, many couples always dine at the same restaurant as well as the same food because they believe that new restaurant would not as perfect as that one they used to go. Thus, afraid of a negative result, prevent them to make changes.
On the other hand, there are many people who believe vice versa. These people are used to explore new lifestyles, cultures, and everything which alter the tedious life. Albeit, not all changes bring happiness and profit for them, they do not prevent changes, and they eagerly embrace every new event. Specifically, at work, it is transparent that each change may lead to a new opportunity which does not exist before. Consequently, changes are considered as a positive happening even though they are not very significant like as a simple hair color or home decoration.
To sum up, people have different attitudes towards changes. I personally believe reasonable changes in every life are essential for triumph. Also, new changes should be accepted and considered as a positive phenomenon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.203187251 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72972627442 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605577689243 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9317167799 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11581610475 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410406018547 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310170966578 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742887802892 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014883621352 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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