Today, the majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family?
A children’s growth and development completely depends on their parents. Nowadays, not only in cities but also in rural areas, children are grown up under the guidance of their grandparents. This is because their parents are busy on their work. The development of the children without the proper guidance of their parents have both positive and negative on the whole family.
Firstly, due to this type of children’s development, the relationship gap between parents and children will increase. The parents who are busy on their job could not properly monitor the daily activities of their children. They do not aware of where their children go or whom they meet, as a result, it will be a high possibility that their children can involve in any unwanted activities, like drug addiction. If their children involve in this type of activity then the whole family will suffer in future.
Secondly, another negative consequences of the children who raised by their grandparents is that it effects on their academic result. The grandparents are old enough, so they could not give the proper guidance to their grandchildren, children also do not obey their command. Because of this, when parents are absence at home during their working hour, children do not concentrate on their study. They spend their maximum time for playing video games or other sports. As a result, their academic result collapse, which will impact on their later life. Due to this reason, their family members are also suffer.
On the other hand, the children who are raised by their grandparents have some positive effect on their family. As their parents are busy on work, they have to take maximum decision without the help of their parents, which will make them self reliable. It also make them as a decision maker during their later life, and they can also contribute themselves on any family decision making.
To sum up, although the children who grown up by their grandparents have some positive effects, its negative effects outweigh the positive ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, as a result, on the whole, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09821428571 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67714082166 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467261904762 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5550496651 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389132488857 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168588335161 0.084324248473 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619767139958 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247993516894 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811477282127 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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