Today in many countries, people are living in a “throwaway” society where things are used for a short time and then thrown away.
What do you think are the causes and what problems will it lead to?
(Write at least 250 words)
In contemporary society, there is an opinion that humankind is living with a wasteful lifestyle, in which things are thrown away after being used just for a short period of time. The following paper will be looking at the roots of this worrying trend as well as examine the potential issues that throwaway lifestyle may lead to.
To begin with, there are several reasons associated with the fact that some individuals get rid of their belongings despite only using these items for a few times. First, people often dispose items that are mass-produced and comes with a cheap price. For instance, plastic bags and bottles are manufactured in a large-scale and tagged with incredibly cheap costs. Hence, for some people, these items are no longer useful after being used once and should be thrown away. Another noteworthy reason is that a considerable number of people, often females, are believed to be wasteful. To elaborate, these people are appearance-conscious as they pay a lot of attention to how they appear in public. As a result, it can be seen that these people have a tendency to throw away, give away or sometimes resell their clothes after wearing once or twice because they may have a strong desire to look differently every time they show up in public places.
Apart from the abovementioned reasons, a number of problems can be anticipated when people start to throw their items away after a short time of using. A noticeable problem would be financial burdens. To explain, those who tend to get rid of their items, such as clothes, and purchase new ones in hope of having an impressive look in front of others have to deal with financial issues as they may have to spend their budget to buy new clothes. More importantly, if these individuals come from middle or even lower class in society, they will definitely suffer from financial debts as a consequence of this habit. Furthermore, one major problem of throwing things is that it can lead to severe environmental pollution. In other words, non-biodegradable items, such as plastic-wrapped products, can jam water system, causing water pollution once the amount of garbage become excessive if people dispose their plastic trash inappropriately.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that “throwaway society” can happen because of people’s habit of throwing mass-produced items and buying new things to take care of their appearance. Moreover, this trend might potentially cause financial and environmental problems for individuals and society respectively.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... away after being used just for a short period of time. The following paper will be looking at...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18509615385 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0101826926 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552884615385 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0662608485 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.882352941 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4705882353 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173555800237 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607930725108 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481998730777 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124443393438 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442524379013 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... away after being used just for a short period of time. The following paper will be looking at...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18509615385 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0101826926 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552884615385 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0662608485 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.882352941 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4705882353 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173555800237 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607930725108 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481998730777 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124443393438 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442524379013 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.