Today, in many countries, there is insufficient respect for old people. What are the reasons? What problem it might cause? How this socio-economic problem can be solved?
A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness, and trust, person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness, and trust, no longer seem important. jhjjjxs jhsjasna,saia kjass snhs nju nss nsa ha ai kajsias hjsuas asjysu njs ssais nklasia asjkaks maja ksdjis jkkdi kdjiw kijdak mkja ksjak kksa maao asoo m,sk kkas mkajs asna askajs asbdt sksod kalsios smaksj smkajsai amkajsa a,sja odk owqojk aka askaj kas kasjska aska kqjq xak ,mla mlak laka mak sdm xla alaslm
xkms mkaska xmsama xmlas ala lal dkdo llas assjd dsjsh zas xmnj ,sdks klsd lam ska asjka asuqs sahausa sks A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness, and trust, person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness, and trust, no longer seem important. jhjjjxs jhsjasna,saia kjass snhs nju nss nsa ha ai kajsias hjsuas asjysu njs ssais nklasia asjkaks maja ksdjis jkkdi kdjiw kijdak mkja ksjak kksa maao asoo m,sk kkas mkajs asna askajs asbdt sksod kalsios smaksj smkajsai amkajsa a,sja odk owqojk aka askaj kas kasjska aska kqjq xak ,mla mlak laka mak sdm xla alaslm
xkms mkaska xmsama xmlas ala lal dkdo llas assjd dsjsh zas xmnj ,sdks klsd lam ska asjka asuqs sahausa sks
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Jhjjjxs
...s, and trust, no longer seem important. jhjjjxs jhsjasna,saia kjass snhs nju nss nsa ha...
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... longer seem important. jhjjjxs jhsjasna,saia kjass snhs nju nss nsa ha ai kajsias hj...
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...kdjiw kijdak mkja ksjak kksa maao asoo m,sk kkas mkajs asna askajs asbdt sksod kals...
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...t sksod kalsios smaksj smkajsai amkajsa a,sja odk owqojk aka askaj kas kasjska ask...
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... sksod kalsios smaksj smkajsai amkajsa a,sja odk owqojk aka askaj kas kasjska aska k...
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...qojk aka askaj kas kasjska aska kqjq xak ,mla mlak laka mak sdm xla alaslm xk...
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...kasjska aska kqjq xak ,mla mlak laka mak sdm xla alaslm xkms mkaska xmsama xm...
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...q xak ,mla mlak laka mak sdm xla alaslm xkms mkaska xmsama xmlas ala lal dkdo ll...
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... ,mla mlak laka mak sdm xla alaslm xkms mkaska xmsama xmlas ala lal dkdo llas a...
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...sama xmlas ala lal dkdo llas assjd dsjsh zas xmnj ,sdks klsd lam ska asjka asuqs...
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... ala lal dkdo llas assjd dsjsh zas xmnj ,sdks klsd lam ska asjka asuqs sahausa s...
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...ala lal dkdo llas assjd dsjsh zas xmnj ,sdks klsd lam ska asjka asuqs sahausa sk...
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Suggestion: Jhjjjxs
...s, and trust, no longer seem important. jhjjjxs jhsjasna,saia kjass snhs nju nss nsa ha...
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Suggestion: , saia
... longer seem important. jhjjjxs jhsjasna,saia kjass snhs nju nss nsa ha ai kajsias hj...
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...kdjiw kijdak mkja ksjak kksa maao asoo m,sk kkas mkajs asna askajs asbdt sksod kals...
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...t sksod kalsios smaksj smkajsai amkajsa a,sja odk owqojk aka askaj kas kasjska ask...
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... sksod kalsios smaksj smkajsai amkajsa a,sja odk owqojk aka askaj kas kasjska aska k...
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...qojk aka askaj kas kasjska aska kqjq xak ,mla mlak laka mak sdm xla alaslm xk...
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...kasjska aska kqjq xak ,mla mlak laka mak sdm xla alaslm xkms mkaska xmsama xm...
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...q xak ,mla mlak laka mak sdm xla alaslm xkms mkaska xmsama xmlas ala lal dkdo ll...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...sama xmlas ala lal dkdo llas assjd dsjsh zas xmnj ,sdks klsd lam ska asjka asuqs...
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... ala lal dkdo llas assjd dsjsh zas xmnj ,sdks klsd lam ska asjka asuqs sahausa s...
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Suggestion: ,
...ala lal dkdo llas assjd dsjsh zas xmnj ,sdks klsd lam ska asjka asuqs sahausa sk...
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...dks klsd lam ska asjka asuqs sahausa sks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 24.0651302605 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 41.998997996 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28455284553 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59248903664 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.40243902439 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.664381152 49.4020404114 341% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.714285714 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1428571429 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0323089247529 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282082220036 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0163894620235 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0222983514643 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157946989851 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 50.2224549098 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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