Today, more and more full time university students focus on other activities rather than spend a lot of time studying. Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities.
Nowadays, most of the universities and colleges promote another social activities despite of studying. Therefore, University students encourage this criteria to. Apart from that, according to some people and I personally believe that it is necessary for students to participate in other such tasks. There are plenty of reasons behind this criteria ans are discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in contemporary settings, both schooling and universities prefer activities in all aspects despite of learning books. Hence, there are plethora of causes which shows the positive impacts of this criteria. The first and foremost factor behind this is inclined in knowledge regarding social tasks, society bases works and such aspects. In this manner, if students do survey of their surroundings, thus they become aware of numerous incidents which are going in the society and on social tasks based. For instance, in present duration, crime rates become maximize day by day, especially related to sexual harassment and such aspects. In 2010, university students surveyed these crime rates and about 60% of cases were come in front related to sexual harrasment, molestation and so on especially from Delhi, Mumbai and these metropolitan cities. Due to which, students become aware of these society based crimes and also aware the public through these crimes by following social programmes and events.
Moreover, the another factor of this criteria is boost in their confidence and personality level. In this manner, if students become participate in other activities then they become confident while doing any task or conversation with public without any bash. For instance, of students do any survey regarding any sector, thus they become more capable while doing their duty. They ask their questionnaire positively on conducted interviews of public or their opinions. Due to which, their communication level become increased and this also shows a great positive impression on their personality to.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that, it is a superior necessity for students to be participated in other tasks in comparison to doing study a lot. Because, this criteria shows superior picture of their aspects in all manners such as awareness regards social and society, boosting of confidence stage and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44198895028 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81284386263 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511049723757 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4508876066 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.444444444 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17080116798 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599375573698 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637072405554 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123889152367 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541500748688 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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