Today, more and more full time university students focus on other activities rather than spend a lot of time studying. Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities.
Nowadays, pupil spend maximum time on other activities rather than study in full time universities. Handful of people believe that masses should spend a lot of time on studies while others think they should be involved in other activities. I would discuss both the views in the forthcoming paragraphs.
On the one side, why individuals think youngsters give more concentrate on their studies rather than other activities. If teenagers study a lot of time thus they might achieve their goals as well as this also become helpful for their economic development. Because, if they study hard then they will get reputative job and this shows positive impression on the economic progression of nation. For instance, Australia is developed country because 90% of masses are well educated and it showed in 2018 survey that was conducted by American government.
On the other side, a lot of individuals believe youngsters should be participate in other activities in comparison to spend more time on studies. Some students are not good in studies thus they must be involved in other activities like sports, painting and so on. Moreover, youngsters should not focus on studies at all time, they should do another tasks which maintains their mentalbiliy. If they do only study they could face number of health problems such as eyesight and back pain problem. If they other activities thus they could make their personality impressive. For instance, Mr. Dhoni is a famous cricketer player of India, he was not good in their studies however most of the youngsters are admire by him due to their success in sports.
To conclude, although, focus on the studies is most important, yet, they should also be participated in another tasks. Because, if they study a lot of time thus they could suffering from many problems. Therefore, they should study as well as other activities to.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...n other activities rather than study in full time universities. Handful of people believe...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'participated'?
Suggestion: participated
...ndividuals believe youngsters should be participate in other activities in comparison to sp...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...such as eyesight and back pain problem. If they other activities thus they could m...
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Line 3, column 702, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'admired'.
Suggestion: admired
...dies however most of the youngsters are admire by him due to their success in sports. ...
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Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'suffer'
Suggestion: suffer
...hey study a lot of time thus they could suffering from many problems. Therefore, they sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04207119741 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72162704998 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514563106796 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4705996826 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348638832151 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136110850034 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119092081268 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244377854976 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102676873253 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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