today more and more people are using mobile phones and computer.thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face.To what extant do you agree or disagree?
It is true that in these days off spring using the cell phones and computer through there are several gadgets using him/her in our life.The root can that some adolescent ponder that today dozen has losing facilities to talking visa to visa . they could not consciousness talking with someone.There are manifold reasons for this .This essay would throw some aspects an all lights in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue are multiheads.There most predominant it is no doubt today every people using the technology as well as there are very common thing in human being life.For instance, most of time person has using the electronic materials like laptop ,smart phones and iPhone,computer ,
tablets and so on.Therefore,there are very basic need of utilize life.Otherwise in my point of view technology is not bad such as technology plays a vital role in our life than machines would superb for their work.
Nevertheless,there are no denying,I can say that all people using the mobile phone in whole life.Moreover kids has umpteen addicted for technology as far ass they should not consciousness in any activities.For example study ,outdoor games, function ,reality show, sports extra.However they always like introvert himself/ herself.last but not the least youth has not liking conversation with some body than they have not able awareness communicating tele to tele for anyone but also pupil should not interesting society problem and they does not matter what have issuing in their region.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand there are strong opinion technology is very essential part of life.I think that drozen must use limit the internet all in all we are good impacts of citizens.on the other hand they would involve any problem instead of activities.Thus, they can communication one to other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, no doubt, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20408163265 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04143380272 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62925170068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 161.513343102 49.4020404114 327% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 306.0 106.682146367 287% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.8 20.7667163134 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.4 7.06120827912 459% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104162962311 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542634397086 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314789215591 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566439444378 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034950199058 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.5 13.0946893788 248% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 50.2224549098 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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