Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?
The increasing level of obesity is becoming a major concern in many countries nowadays. This essay will highlight some key reasons why obesity is a challenging dilemma in the modern world and will propose a range of measures that can be taken to address this situation.
The globalization process has rapidly changed the human’s lifestyle that can create some primary causes leading obesity. First and foremost, people are becoming obese these days is that they are consuming a staggering amount of junk food, fast food instead of eating healthy food in daily meals. Secondly, the lack of exercise or lazy behavior is a major reason for the growing rate of obesity among people. A case in point is, after a tough day at the office, many white-collar workers tend to relax and recover by surfing social media sites at home rather than going to a gym. Last but not least, in some cases, genetic and psychological issues such as insomnia, pressure, depression are also the main causes of weight gain.
There are measures which could be implemented to deal with these root causes of obesity. To begin with, parents are expected to keep an eye on their children's eating habit as well as ensure that they have a healthy diet. More importantly, the government plays an integral role in investing money to build up the public fitness centers for their citizen. What is more, they also should have some campaigns about the negative effects of obesity in order to many people can get to gain a better understanding of it. Lastly, teachers should encourage their students to take part in a sports club as well as organize more outdoor learning activities at school.
In conclusion, Obesity rising to alarming levels and is considered a global epidemic due to its severe effects on human health. To tackle this problem is not only the effort of each individual but also the cooperation of the world community.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in some cases, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90740740741 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59630833081 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626543209877 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.466593382 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180518525287 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050509703118 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531596782748 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982287785455 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364103668975 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.