Health is the key of happiness. Nowadays, average weight of people are rising day by day, as well as their they are having lack of healthy body. I think over consumption of oily food and lack of exercise are the major reason of this. Maintaining diet and regular exercise would be the means of those problems. First and foremost reason for gaining weight is that eating too much fatty food. In modern era, every people are busy and they are not having enough time to cook, as they choose to go to restuarant for purchasing food for their meal. Restaurant usually prepare unhealthy food and though those foods ar tastier than that of homemade food, due to using anything as per cooker demand. sometimes they use unhealthy ingredients such as testing salt, food colour -which make food more attractive- and so on. Busy persons buy those food without judging them,and therefore, felling in danger after consumption. As a result of consuming this food they got flashy and their health get out of their reach.
The second is reason is that people are no taking enough exercise. As they are too much lazy in some countries, especially in developing countries, they usually stay at home all day long. So, their body not getting that much energy to digest consumed food thus their body got unfit and sometimes they suffer from various diseases.
To solve this problems some answers should be followed. Prime one is that talking healthy food and less fatty food. As we know, oil is responsible for getting fat so we must avoid it as much as we can. Consequently, people of everyday region would less flashy and more healthy. Furthermore, regular exercise would be the second means of keeping body fit because of digesting consumed food and increasing strength of anti-disease virus. For instance, one of my uncle is suffering from overweight and some other diseases. After going to the doctor, he received some suggestions that he should walk daily more than 30 minutes. After following the doctor's advice he got healthier than before and now he is leading as diseases free life.
In a nutshell, over eating fatty food and not talking taking regular exercise are the key reason of getting overweight and unfit bldy. However, consuming less oily and hygienic food, and taking regular exercise would be the best means these problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...re than 30 minutes. After following the doctors advice he got healthier than before and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87878787879 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44333809173 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5019121148 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2173913043 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95652173913 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0863924269792 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301427500025 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284130490415 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526135584265 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337417787054 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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