There are more and more people travelling nowadays than that in any time of history. In my opinion, the development of the society, especially in transportation and information technology contributes in this increasement of travellers. As for them, they can not only have a exotic experience but also broaden their visions when travelling.
To begin with, the transportation has made great strides from last century. After the inventions of planes and vehicles. People will never be limited in their howtowns. Instead, the couriosities of the world outside has always attracted human beings. With more advanced transportantion network including express ways, trains and flights, it is more convenient for people to travel no matter in their countries or all over the world. Addionally, the advancements in Information techonolgy also resulted in more people travelling. People can easily gain the informations of the places they want to visit by various kinds of media. Even when travelling, they can search where to live or eat via mobile internet instantly. Such convenience never showed up before.
Moreover, people benefit more from travelling. Firstly, they can try something new in the trip. For travelling, it is a method getting out of your current living environments. This is the major good merit for most people living in Cities. Once going outside to the places they travell to, they will have a unique time by all of the things they can do, from enjoying spas to sky diving. Any kinds of these activies will make them have a different experience. Secondly, these experince will broaden their visions, which originated from the inital reason, meet people's curiosities. There are some over 200 coutries of the world, people's living methods and beatiful sceneries vary significantly, once people travel more places, they will have wider eyevisions, which is a higher level demand of human beinigs.
In all, the fast changing world makes more travellers due to its rapid developments. On the other hand, people would have more self satisfactions such as different experinces and broader visions via travelings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rs. As for them, they can not only have a exotic experience but also broaden thei...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ell to, they will have a unique time by all of the things they can do, from enjoying spas ...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...ings they can do, from enjoying spas to sky diving. Any kinds of these activies will make ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as for, as to, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30473372781 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90356090742 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594674556213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2806967597 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241429120842 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070359599558 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836149389288 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168498114266 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291200398437 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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