Today s low cost airlines are able to offer fast and cheap travel However some people believe this is at a cost to the planet Suggest ways that governments and individuals could tackle the environmental impact of low cost flights

Essay topics:

Today’s low-cost airlines are able to offer fast and cheap travel. However, some people believe this is at a cost to the planet.

Suggest ways that governments and individuals could tackle the environmental impact of low-cost flights.

In recent years, low-cost airlines make air travel accessible to the masses. Nevertheless, it is widely argued that operations of these airlines have a major impact on the environment. This essay will outline possible to the environmental problems that individuals and governments can take to tackle these problems.

One of the main reasons that aviation industry causes great impact on the planet is enormous amount of carbon emissions, which leads to the increasing of air pollution. However, it is not impossible to find effective ways to control the air pollution. Carbon offsetting technique is the easiest way for individuals to solve this trouble. This allows travelers to voluntarily pay for the amount of CO2 emissions that result in their travels. A monetary donation is made which is then invested in green projects that can counter carbon emissions.

Governments could certainly put more effort into reducing air pollution. They could introduce stricter laws to limit emissions from aviation industry or to force airline companies developing a bio-fuel to reduce the dependency on fossil fuels that release carbon. They could also impose 'green taxes' on airlines companies or air passengers. In this way, people would be encouraged to take fewer flights abroad, therefore reducing emissions.

In conclusion, both governments and individuals must play their parts in looking after their planet by donating green projects, limiting emissions and charging the airlines to reduce flights.

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Average: 8.9 (4 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52380952381 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85238354755 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1467283564 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1538461538 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234177334217 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772770234318 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534417476904 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134889074348 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720916563772 0.056905535591 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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