The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and mak

Essay topics:

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie graph and table indicate the primary causes making agricultural land less productive, also the table shows specific details of three regions of the world which were affected in 1990s.

Overall, the main reason for land degradation was over doing agriculture. While agricultural purpose affected many regions, Europe was the highest percentage land degraded and caused by deforestation during the 1990s.

Over-grazing was the highest cause to make land degradation, 35% in total. With the same agricultural purpose, over-cultivation accounted for the third reason, 28%, which followed the second effect was deforestation (30%).

Europe was the most be affected with total land degraded (23%). However, the main reason of Europe was deforestation, 9.8%. The second region had degraded land was Oceania because of over-grazing, which was accounted for 11.3%. North America with 3.3% land became over-cultivation was the least land become degarated.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1990s'.
Suggestion: in the 1990s
...egions of the world which were affected in 1990s. Overall, the main reason for land d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70629370629 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03546449437 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1168381076 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244158804968 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115309191696 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937810911619 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179441103155 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112219753178 0.0819641961636 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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