Today’s schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is irrefutable that school is the building block of education. It plays a vital role in one's career. It is believed that schools should add money management subject in student's curriculum, which I will examine by looking at the areas of important skill and understand the value of money.
There are numerous concrete reasons why money management is essential for students. First, it is an indispensable skill for children. For example, if children become conscious about how to survive financially, they can easily tackle financial problems which may be occured in their future. Even, they can also learn about the saving and investment, which is definitely helpful to them later in life. Moreover, white learning the money management they can also understand the value of money. Consequently, they may not become spendthrifts and rather than spending their money lavishly, they buy things rationally. In short, learning how to survive finacially is beneficial for students.
However, some short sighted people think that learning money management is not necessary for students. First, childhood is supposed to be worryless period of life, so this type of new activity add in their curriculum becomes burdensome. To examplify, as in their daily life they do lots of activities, so they may be not able to manage their important activities.
In recapitulation,I would say that although learning money management in school time becomes burden for students, they can learn a significant skill for their future as well as also gives value to money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, for example, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30241935484 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89179818594 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568548387097 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1041507768 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0922908201959 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354052235756 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351500996585 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0625916449962 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149422578322 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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