Nowadays, we find lack of fresh air, fresh water and even some food products like milk and oil. This is due to the over usage of resources that are given for us naturally. We can find this effect growing rapidly and every is finding it trouble. This essay delves the main reasons for this and also methods to follow.
The two main causes of this are over population and lack of restrictions. As there is an rapid rise in the strength of world, the usage of materials is also increasing. To meet the needs of people more production is being started by various organizations. This leads to over exploitation and sometimes even eradicates certain materials. If we consider silicon, which is main component in manufacturing chips, is used in various electronic devices. In the modern era, as use of smart devices are rising, the silicon is required and it is adequate in the nature. There is a shortage in the 21th century. Thus, has lead to International crises and different nations are worried because of this. Moreover there is no restriction on how much quantity need to be used. This eventually lead to taking more than required. In Japan, every yeaar more than required fish are caught and shipped all over the world. In contradiction to this, the rare species cannot be found today. Thus, the over consumption removed them from environment.
The possible solutions to this could be bring awareness and making laws in using them. The easy way to over come this is by educating citizens. By establishing campus where people use huge amount of resources. There should be NGO's which meet individuals and state the condition we are in and also showing in what way future will be. With this at least single human can change which makes huge impact. The other possible method is by implementing laws and strict rules. The elected person should place law in court in preserving these. For instance, it should be like fisherman should catch onle certain amount of fish and not exceed. If they did not cooperative to this they should be punished accordingly. Therefore, everyone can protect the gift we got.
To summarize, these days we can see the natural substance getting removed, this is mainly because of over population and having no proper restrictions. These can be overcome by educating human beings and also with the help of government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, at least, even so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86533665835 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65866523236 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556109725686 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3035084854 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.275862069 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8275862069 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93103448276 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215481275722 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508566312693 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393733101694 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134072912643 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340918555342 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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