Today's society provide people with various ways to lose weight, such as special diets or exercise regimes. Many people believe though that poor food and today's lifestyle should be addressed first. What is your viewpoint of the situation?

Nowadays there is an opinion asserting that a multitude practical method could be taken into consideration to lose weight including changing diet or working out, while others advocate that it could be tackled by altering lifestyle and reviewing on feeds. Personally, I agree that the unhealthy lifestyle of many people should remedy which will be elaborated in detail.

To begin with, no one can deny that in today's society public tend to consume more pre-cooked, take away or convenient foods as the main consequence of facing demanding life situation. Simply put, inextricably intertwined with other aspects of life, our nourishment is believed to be the central importance of a healthy way of life. This is amply illustrated by the fact that we are what we eat thereby eating more rich food and cooking using fresh ingredients automatically give rise fairly healthy lifestyle. In the first step, therefore, it is imperative to cook with healthy ingredients to follow an admirable lifestyle.

Having said that, the latter step which can be a cornerstone of being slim and avoiding from obese is to sport regularly along with to pay attention to the feed. To put it differently, having consistency to carry out sport as well as cooking healthy meals leads to people associate with a healthy lifestyle in which can possess a perfect body. Moreover, eliminating ready meals and pre-made food from daily meals are bound to create a barrier to receive salt, sugar, fat, taste intensifier and chemical added in mass production, which consumers are not aware by the body, keep highly likely people's body on the right weight.

To conclude, there are some valid arguments on this contentious topic; on balance, it is my firm conviction that people should take two-step in order to gain slim weigh and not obese. Initially prohibiting unhealthy food consumption and after that doing sport regularly.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13870967742 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79070293883 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641935483871 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4503724212 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.818181818 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205950479975 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071088193533 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349488030595 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110188564981 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359367294377 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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