These days, some people dream of setting up their own business; however, others tend to be occupied in companies or organizations.
This determination could be beneficial to becoming self-employed. It is not easy to get on with unreasonable colleagues. Therefore, when someone works for a company has to put up with his colleagues, whereas if someone had his business, he would not tolerate freak colleagues. Furthermore, earning much money would entice everyone to think about self-employing. For example, an employee of a big company like google considers the annual earning of it, and if he is ambitious, he thinks about how to make money as big as google. So he undoubtedly will quit his job to set up his own business.
On the other hand, running a private company is an arduous chore. Firstly, the cost of running a business or small start-up can be overwhelming. In the beginning, every business person needs some capital investment, a group of which does not afford it, so they have to take out a loan from banks. If things do not go very well, they are going to face loan repayment problems, and even worse, face bankruptcy. In addition, a number of start-ups need to take on some employees to start work. Although they are not profitably commencing, the co-founders have a commitment to pay wages regularly no matter the company's financial situation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, as to, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9347826087 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02675217576 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65652173913 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.035714189 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3076923077 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148996955791 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549414775025 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713217854908 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105595097655 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330561184791 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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