In today’s society, the increasing crime rate is considered to be a pressing issue that many countries are facing. Some people think that the benefit of a prison sentence outweighs other punishment, Although the benefits of this are varied, the drawbacks, in my opinion, should be paid more attention to.
On the one hand, putting these culprits in jail has several advantages. Firstly, for civilized societies, justice must always be delivered, the criminals must be paid for their sin and they should be put into prison to increase the safety of society, Imprisonment can isolate offenders from society, and they do not have the change to commit crimes again. Besides, when criminals are jailed, the victims feel trust in the legal system, otherwise, these victims will lose trust in society and can cause many personal revenge actions and may make social disorder. Secondly, this kind of punishment would be a good example for would-be criminals who do not dare to commit crimes when thinking about life in prison.
On the other hand, compare with other kinds of punishment, imprisonment has some drawbacks. First of all, it could be remarkably costly to manage the prison. Governments have to invest a considerable amount of money and other resources to keep the inmates. Secondly, It is unreasonable to impose a prison sentence on all levels of crime, some types of petty crimes may consider probation instead of imprisonment since imprisonment can result in a -size-fits-all approach, which may harm petty crimes. Thirdly, the prisoner has lacked education and training, therefore, they are difficult to integrate into the community. Research shows that most prisoners commit crimes within a year of release and unable to find a job.
In conclusion, although there are still some disadvantages of imprisonment, I think the advantages of this punishment are still outstanding and still useful in modern life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, i think, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24264705882 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85482616624 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4246234889 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.833333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0833333333 7.06120827912 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174712084098 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569796827748 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554165457467 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755788926229 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057498375342 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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