Some people believe that museums may become entertaining places which incite youth to relax; Others, however, hold the view that museums should only be teaching aids, while I am in favor of the former opinion. I am going to delve into both views in my essay.
On the one hand, museums are generally beautiful places with special architect styles like gothic, roman, antic, etc, that are suitable for people to visit and relax. Moreover, there are a large number of heritages of national which contribute following historical periods such as music heritages, architectural heritages, painting heritages, etc, all kinds of heritages may attract the tourist, especially oversea tourists and government can get a budget from selling ticket for those tourists. Besides, this is the best way to propagandize the Viet Nam sovereignty to the public, for example, with the Viet Nam map, we can prove the Truong Sa and Hoang Sa islands belong to Viet Nam.
On the other hand, museums are essential for education. There are a lot of things in museums that students can learn. Besides some knowledge student gets from the library, they also receive interesting knowledge from the heritages species in the museums. Furthermore, taking students to museums is visual education which is more effective compare to theory studying.
In conclusion, the government should harmony combine both kinds typicals of museums not only for the enterprise but also for education to get adequate achievements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...to visit and relax. Moreover, there are a large number of heritages of national which contribute ...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'heritages'' or 'heritage's'?
Suggestion: heritages'; heritage's
... receive interesting knowledge from the heritages species in the museums. Furthermore, ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23949579832 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69680153277 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.2995079936 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.7 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253835400805 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10341508802 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102300855521 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165395077826 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115154074543 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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