TOPIC: Some people argue that the purpose of zoos is only to entertain people. What do you think? What other purposes of zoos?
Zoo is a place where people can find a variety of different species. Some people reckon that the only aim of zoo in entertain people. But from my point of view, I don’t absolutely agree with this opinion and I believe that zoos also have another aims.
First of all, I can’t deny that entertain is one of the most important purposes of zoos. Zoos have beautiful scenery like a mini world of animals and plants. We can find a wide range of species from all parts of the Earth in zoos. In Ho Chi Minh city, Thao Cam Vien which also called Sai Gon Zoo and Botanical Garden has pure air, nice view and plentiful of animals especially endangered species. This is a good way people who want to spend time with family and friends at the weekend.
Second, zoo is a place where animals could be taken care carefully and could be saved from being killed by hunters. Animals in zoo are look after by experienced staff. Animals are fed on time and checked health periodically. Besides, zoos is a good environment for scientist research animal behavior and find the way to protect endangered species from extinct.
Furthermore, zoo is the best place to educate children about wildlife. For instance, children can be more excited with their biology lesson when they can see by eyes and get knowledge from their own experiments in the zoo. It also a good way to raise their awareness of protecting animals.
In short, zoos not only play a key role in the entertainment of the society but also in education, in scientific research and in species conservation. That is the reason why government should maintain and develop the quality of the zoos.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, for instance, in short, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68620689655 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56529707991 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8046410168 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9411764706 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203391935585 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730028446081 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837278110824 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119088859862 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064221652834 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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