Tourism is considered as an indispensable source for all countries especially in the scope of economy due to this reason, distinct type of countries just give focus towards their tourists for creating a maximum attraction between them related to the famous places.
To commence with, nowadays the people are preferring to visit the places which mainly related to the different nation. As, the government are providing the better maintenance facility to the historical buildings which is belonged to the Godfathers as well as these buildings reflect the beautiful scenario which automatically creates an influence in the people to come there to thorough insights into its surroundings.For instance, in India, Taj Mahal which is made up with the white marbles , is making a better history between the people the consequently it elevates the India's position in the terms of finance and also help to promote its vintage equipments in other nationalities.
In addition to this, the non-residents people are encouraged to spend their leisure time by watching the abnormal structure of tourist places.During this time, the currency between the two countries are exchanged which surprisingly increases the foreign exchange rate and makes the strong bonding between two nations. For example, a survey was conducted by the researchers which showed, India country is become able to ameliorate its relations with America through this peculiar reason which creates all over development.
To conclude, tourists are not only create the benefits for another country but also create positive points for themselves by enhancing their knowledge about the yester times. Although, a large number of tourists are come to visit the different places, but still the government should try to convert these places into cost - effective element which can help the authorities to gain more in upcoming future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44368600683 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87977224673 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607508532423 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.235999313 49.4020404114 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.857142857 106.682146367 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.8571428571 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.7142857143 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0314914116436 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0150034977241 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0194386286238 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0226730652704 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194800362745 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.16 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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