Technological innovation puts up a challenges not at the front of only business world ,while ,also towards the society running their complicated lives and expand their interaction with different region's people in the global virtual world. As respect to this, Some people believes that some subjects can be better learned through computer usage, inspite , others opine that without computer help few subjects can easily teach to students. The both point of view is taken into consideration with relevant causes and discussed by favourable examples in the forthcoming paragraphs.
In accordance with , First school of thought, the specific subjects can be better dictated to students while using computer in the class-room or in the study room that's placed on the right place with an advantage of favourable environment .For example, academic subjects consists few complicated subjects like Accountancy , Indirect tax and Quantitative subjects , practical problems regarding appropriate answers available in different approachable websites like www.quora.com and other's previous and new-coming like it. It's offers extensive results by hiring professionalised qualified staff and manage a strong customer base.
On the other side, Second school of thought ,adjusting it's entire focus on the those subjects that are not easily understandable by just searching on one topic and relying on few explanations given by recognised websites. Then, there is a need of face to face interaction and practical presentation of how the process is started and ended in the prescribed time in respect of manufacturing operations that belong to lower level worker's given task. For example, in order to become a Chartered accountant ,Company secretary and Bank manager needed to work under Senior Employer to gain practical experience by following internship period must to complete defined conditions.
In the conclusion, it seems to me that the Computer is highly useful in teaching few above -mentioned subjects successfully ,,However, it turn out to be worst for totally practical subjects that can be wholly presentable under some required supervision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63157894737 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05781650025 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637770897833 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.231902773 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.111111111 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8888888889 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20400337393 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707384675162 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971306558726 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130116171768 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755448783187 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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