Job is considered as a necessity source for the people to ameliorate their financial status as along with achieve their prominent targets ,but, nowdays some superiors believe that the personnels should have to provide their services more than the enough time. On this ground, this essay will discuss, what type of obstacles related to money and health can be arised if the workers work supplementary.
To commence with, the employers have to pay extra wages to the workers if they use their services especially, in their leisure time. As, the personnels only responsible to work upto 6to8 hours that are applicable worldwide, because otherwise it can easily affect the economy situation of a country. For an instance, in India, a peculiar law represents, if the personnels are working more than 8 hours then , at this moment, the superiors have to provide double wages for the extra working which absolutely, can raise the figures of salary in the country.
However, despite of its particular drawback, it can also create crisis for the workers in the balanced position of health, because the personnels become more anxious towards their surplus completion of work then they try to eat some medicines which especially involve the drugs stuff, so this situation not only seriously affect the worker s' health but also can generate the pitfalls in the company's target. For example, a survey was conducted by the researchers which showed, the distress illness was drastically increasing in the workers who were loaded by their superiors.
To conclude, its advantages are not outweigh the obstacles of doing more work. Although, there are a lot of laws are made by the government, but, still the companies should also follow these laws in an efficacious manner then the interest of personnels can be protected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13513513514 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70273284287 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.7762980779 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.888888889 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8888888889 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172909998917 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773559454423 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501806771125 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110447814884 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420069479986 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.