Travelling
Transportation is the best way to travel
anywhere, at cheap rates. There are
many types of vehicles in
transportation, like, Trains, buses, and
taxi's, etc. All the transportations had
they on prices trains are less than buses and taxies.
Traveling is now getting more popular
in all countries. In America, there are
many people's loving to travel. In
2009 American people's have own
reasons for travel and they also have
some issues about traveling. Two
types of travels in America first one is
travel by transportation and the second
one is tourists.
In America, all people can not afford
their own cars. so, poor Peoples are
using transportation for their use. that
causes also can be humans are likes
traveling a lot because tourists are traveling for fun and it is very interesting
than any other activities. By traveling,
people can get out of their frustration.
With traveling, people's can watch a lot
of beautiful places.
When any family is going for tourists
travel they are like to use more than
transportations because of the
transportation can interrupt their own
fun that is not good for their
enjoyment. Americans had so many
issues about their transportation, their
government is the big reason for that
kind of issues in america 2009 that year most public
want a good tourist to go for some
interesting destinations. America is a
hole of beautiful scenarios, but
"Burberry hills and James" lakes which
are the most popular places in America.
Lastly, America is a big country in their
currency values and its reputation in
the world. america's facilities are
getting fluctuate sometimes. but all over
the all of America is leading to another country in this world. In my piece of
writing, traveling is fun with great
services. issues are also would be
produced should stopped by our
government
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: So
... people can not afford their own cars. so, poor Peoples are using transportation...
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Suggestion: That
...re using transportation for their use. that causes also can be humans are likes t...
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Suggestion: Americas
...alues and its reputation in the world. americas facilities are getting fluctuate somet...
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Suggestion: But
...ities are getting fluctuate sometimes. but all over the all of America is leadin...
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Suggestion:
...uctuate sometimes. but all over the all of America is leading to another country...
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Suggestion: Issues
... traveling is fun with great services. issues are also would be produced should stop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, second, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30592105263 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93388414222 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509868421053 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7410686656 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.65 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 45.0 4.38176352705 1027% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275368229525 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108008548454 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141678220573 0.0667982634062 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732229893568 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148680932352 0.056905535591 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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