Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays there is universally believed that gender distribution in very subjects taught within the universities should be equivalent. From my perspective, I found no justification against this modification
To begin with, there is a variety of explanations for supporting the similar quantity of male and female undergraduates in every subject. The fundamental reason that is worth mentioning is that it makes a great contribution to promote the gender equality movement in long term. It is particularly significant that by offering more opportunity for women to access the speciality which conventionally considered as male-dominated and vice versa, there will be more diverse in gender in those fields, thereby, constructing a labour market that free from gender-discrimination. By the way of exemplifying, the prejudice towards female police officers has been gradually eliminated thanks to the expanded admission for female students of Police Academies. Furthermore, this may attribute to the higher social status of women in the future and, therefore, eliminate the injustice of remuneration and treatment that women are currently suffering from
Additionally, gender-impartiality in education may be the first step for several breakthroughs that take place in the future. It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that in some occupations which is usually misinterpreted as exclusively suitable for one sex, the other gender can accomplish them even better. An illustration of this is the fashion industry, which is allegedly designed only for women, witnessed several prosperous male models and designers who attained a wide range of sounding achievements. Evidently, the job opportunity of ones should found on their passion and talent, not their gender. Therefore, this transformation among universities may become the culprit of various great characters in different fields henceforth
In conclusion, the gender-equality in every subject taught at universities can bring several advantageous impacts on our society including eliminating gender discrimination in the labour market as well as discovering several great people in the future
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, by the way, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82278481013 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55043547365 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613924050633 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0678471079 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.0 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139951468783 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058341539317 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507142208522 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925126805714 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318351523314 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.63 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.07 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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