University students should pay all the costs of their studies because university education benefits only individuals but not society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed by some that students should be wholly responsible for their tuition payment since tertiary education is beneficial to only them but not society. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this perspective because study costs should be shared by the government and students so as to guarantee the benefits of individuals and society as a whole.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why tuition fees are advised to be partly paid by students. First, having to spend their own money on learning, students would be aware of the value of the study programs that they are pursuing. This perception could stimulate students to study more attentively and labourously so as to pay off their money. Second, the student’s imbursement can ease onus on national resources which are really urgently invested in a broad spectrum of such vital fields as healthcare system or the environment so as to improve the living standard of citizens at large.
On the other hand, the government subsidy for tertiary education also benefits people and society. The first reason is that due to the increasing expensiveness of university education that many people from poor backgrounds can not afford, the funding from the government help more impoverished people attend universities. As a result, they could have well-paid jobs as doctors or lawyers after graduating, earning enough money to help their families overcome poverty. Additionally, since more people will follow higher education if the education fees reduced, the quality of the workforce of a nation would be enhanced. The high standard of human resources undoubtedly ensures the stable development of the entire nation.
In conclusion, the cost of studying at university should be paid by both students and the government because university education brings about considerable merits not only to students but society as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25412541254 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89490683327 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561056105611 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1055410994 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302610137847 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104927193629 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116636256699 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221597096064 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133044113483 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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