The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In today’s world, the communication inside social media has become more popular than the conventional way of physical interaction with people. In my opinion, it has both advantages and disadvantages. In the following information, the reasons will be discussed.
Firstly, the people who live or study in foreign countries cannot meet their families and friends very often because of the high cost of traveling or time. But the solution to talk or contact their loved ones with free of charge is social media such as Facebook Messenger, Wechat, and so on. Secondly, once people pay small amount of money for the usage of the internet, they are able to have conversation with their friends and families anytime and from everywhere by using the computer or smartphone, and people can use the digital screen for other purposes.
Furthermore, seeing each other in person has become one of the risky ways to spread any kind of deadly disease that involves the respiratory system nowadays. According to the World Health Organization, people are advised to stay at home and prefer social distancing. So, only way to know whether their family, relatives and friends are safe during the pandemic is the advancement of technology: social media.
On the other hand, it is said that socializing with people personally gives people more feeling of being loved and being cared when they surrounded by the closest people. It means that people having in-person meeting with their friends and family tend to be psychologically relaxed and feel better. Moreover, people need to meet face-to-face if they want to maintain their friendship strong owing to the fact that friends on social media cannot be true companions.
To conclude, the online platform has its benefits while there are other drawbacks. Even though social media has become a vital part of everyday life, we still have a choice to decide which way is more suitable for us to communicate with people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... has both advantages and disadvantages. In the following information, the reasons ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08411214953 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70807014114 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601246105919 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3046622379 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174556601448 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582175307353 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503308883572 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918619075093 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361269155888 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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