Using computers and the internet develops important skills in young people
Throughout human existence, many skills are developed by the human in order that they survive in nature. Through the progress of improving technologies, all kind of skills for people’s keeping alive are changed especially after Industrial Revolution. The recent times of Industrial Revolution had been invented more complicate machine and after these events, a few years ago, we used to start the automation machines, more intelligent devices and more improving computers and internet. Nowadays, in digital life, the people should have obtain more special abilities for keeping up this life. Therefore, the people learned using computer and internet. This situation consist of a quiet acqusition for kind of people’s ability in everywhere that includes worklife and student life.
In the first place, it is prefered that the people have digital skills through use to computer and internet by the companies. The people has many advantages with using computer and internet which contains many online education that the people need to suitable for their work position. For instance, a mechanical engineer can learn the being used the program ( Solidworks, ANSYS, MatLab etc. ) with online education on the internet for self work position in industry. Consequently, the people can work job that they want to position in spide of the fact that they don’t attend any course.
Secondly, nowadays, the education demands some tends from students who should make homework and project which want to many responsibility and creativity. In addition, some contents claim to learn english about their works. For all the conditions, the students benefit endless favour of internet’s possibilities. They can use to some applications which can practise language and research from a lots information sources easily. Therefore, they can find the possibilities to improve their skills for education.
To sum up, it is obtained that is a lot of skills improving technology about computer and internet. Step by step, the changing digital ages want to more different skills from us. Hopefully, the human correlates the future that brings the new necessary skills with changing world fastly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, kind of, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85841691321 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53550295858 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7817452812 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8421052632 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31065766005 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106994244196 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109858570302 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188436074915 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832393631864 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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