Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examples from you own knowledge or experience.
whether or not parents should teach their children to response to bullying is an increasingly debating viewpoint. there are valid opinions on both sides which I will examine carefully before my owner opinion given.
In some cases, the counteroffensive from children in response to harassment might bring some advantages. when hitting back at bullies, they can threaten bullies not to attack them again, which might reduce serious physical injuries during the fight. Definitely, by making bullies be cautious of who have threatened them then running away while looking for the assistance from elderly people in surrounding areas, children are likely to have more chance to end the fight quickly and keep them safe.
On the other hand, teaching children not to react the harassment violently could consist of positively effect in the long run. Moreover, children should be inspired to look for other ways of resolving disagreements, they are tending to deal with their conflicts through open discussions rather than by force. As a result, this orientation will create a non-violence behavior when they grow up and help them to keep up their relationships in the good way with others.
Although there are still arguments on whether parents should instruct children to response to bullying at school. It is my belief that teaching non-violent strategies is more productive and having better permanent effect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, still, then, while, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36771300448 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79303448703 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659192825112 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6664631039 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.7 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158633363966 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627297212022 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283507225657 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950625631036 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00861635829932 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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