Visual pollution is the major cause of accidents on roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
This statement said is the visual pollution, major cause of accidents. I am totally agreed for this question. I am going to examine this question from agreed point of view.
There are so many reasons to tell about these types of accidents. Firstly, the billboards are the major reason for visual pollution because some shopkeepers paste the poster on billboards for advertising their products and give some discount, so when we are going to anywhere then we see on the billboards for buy some products, although it is distract there mind then we face the major accidents on roads. Moreover, the survey conducted by the government which we have been seen the major accidents on roads only for billboards.
Secondly, the buildings which is made by glass it is also responsible for major accidents. Because light reflects on glass, and then it is revert back in their eyes. And some people have been driving their vehicle near the building then they are not clearly seen on road. So, i think it is also very big reason for road accidents. Furthermore, the government also conducted the survey about these type of accidents hence these type of accidents on peak point when we compare to other accidents.
Overall, government should make some strict laws for decrease these accidents although when who will not following this law then government take strict action on them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'distracted'.
Suggestion: distracted
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reverted'.
Suggestion: reverted
...light reflects on glass, and then it is revert back in their eyes. And some people hav...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... they are not clearly seen on road. So, i think it is also very big reason for ro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96536796537 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5603270204 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.8160657621 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5833333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140066083562 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531268456877 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536481525829 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862358442578 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491856589259 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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