Walking is known to beneficial for health and yet fewer and fewer people are walking these days. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to this problem?
In modern society, how people keep their health is always controversial and walking is widely known as one of the ways to make people stay healthy. However, the number of people who choose to walk is on the decrease. In this essay, I shall shed some light on why people choose not to walk and suggest the solution.
To begin with, it is true that walking is one of the best ways to keep fit. However, in this modern world, people tend to prefer not walking. In my opinion, the primary reason for this social tendency is the growth of public transportation as well as technology. For example, in Japan, the possession rate of the car recorded over 85 per cent in 2017 as the cost of the car is getting cheaper and everybody can afford it. In addition to this, there are many train stations in the city and the trains much more often run than in the past. These definitely make people stay from walking and lead to several health issues such as obesity.
In order to deal with this situation, I strongly believe that the most effective way is that the government raise the cost of petrol or a fee for public transportation. In fact, in Malaysia, the government levy 50 per cent of tax on the car so that there are a lot of cases that people cannot buy it. In this situation, people do not have any options and they have to choose to walk. Therefore, raising up the fee of the car and public transportation is the best way to encourage people to walk.
In conclusion, the progress of technology is strongly related to the decrease in the number of people who walk. In order to solve this issue, governments should take more tax from the car or public transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45424836601 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54175477228 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496732026144 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3544981108 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279636757608 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968535040367 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395668823764 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174460920512 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505252573913 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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