As the computer translates quickly and accurately, learning a foreign language is a waste of time?
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern society, with the growth of technology, the computer often has a great function of language translation and it can translate any languages accurately. In this situation, there are some people who argue that people do not need to learn a foreign language. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this statement.
To begin with, even though the computer can translate more quickly and accurately than in the past, its accuracy and speed are still poor when compared to people who can speak the language that they want to translate since computer needs to be typed letters in order to translate. For example, there is a lot of situation that needs to be progressed effectively such as an international business meeting. If people use the translator on the computer, it will take a longer time since the computer needs to be typed the language that people want to translate. In addition to this, according to some studies, people who learn several languages are unlikely to get the disease such as dementia than those who do not. Learning language stimulates people’s brain and strengthens the cognition ability of human beings. Therefore, it goes without saying that learning a language is very important and plays a crucial role in our society.
However, despite the fact that learning a language has a lot of benefits if people want to master the language, it takes such a long time. In fact, the researcher has shown in order to be the native level speaker, learner needs 5 years on average and in most cases, because of this, people have to study language as their major and they cannot study other things.
In conclusion, even though learning language has some drawbacks, I strongly believe that the advantages overwhelmingly outnumber the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in most cases, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00337837838 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79044851298 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0958381304 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.416666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248353519176 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943191889108 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546163610403 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149584565038 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729177775464 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.