We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in businesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
Nowadays, we enhance our interactions with IT-machines, computers and robots to a great extent, so we are more and more dependent on them in business, medicine and even in air. This essay will consider the possible forecasts in the future usage of this special tool and potential harms that it could bring to population.
It is almost apparent that nobody can imagine their day without the involvement of this indispensable tool in their activities, no matter work or studying. To begin with, modern circumstances of epidemic situation (Covid 19) force all students and teachers to adjust to online studying. So, today we have plethora online platforms for academic activities. Moreover, the technologies are constantly developing and open new horizons that bring many conveniences for tutors. They have opportunity to conduct classes with several students around the world simultaneously staying in one place by using the computer. Turning to the workspace, multitude of jobs were simplified respond to redirection of hard or time-consuming processes to artificial intelligence. This, in turn, continue to develop not only in offices but In hospitals, for instance. The modern utilization of computers reach top when they are able to set the right characteristics for lasers in eye-correction surgery.
However, looking from the whole perspective, this technical innovations in IT sphere could be also harmful for people. The inordinate usage of computers in replacement teachers could lead to multitude of sociological problems. Teachers are not only the storeroom of knowledge for students, but the role model of conduct and leaders on the way to the adulthood. Thus, the absence of face-to-face communication both students and teachers might lead to social degradation. Besides, excessive utilization of this advanced tool may become a hindrance for majority of workers such as accountants, nurses and other low qualified personnel. Because this type of work will be done by an artificial intelligence, what will inevitably lead to growth of unemployment rate.
To summarise, computer revolution actually extremely beneficial for us in getting through plethora of time-consuming activities, but its usefulness should not be overestimated as well as the involvement of IT-robots should not be universal.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53824362606 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26197538804 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611898016997 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9674878198 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263575584277 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664978068366 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571166657826 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15707745858 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387625807368 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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