We have long imagined the possibility that life exists on other planets Do you believe that there is life in the universe outside of Earth What would be the implications of proving that alien life exists

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We have long imagined the possibility that life exists on other planets. Do you believe that there is life in the universe outside of Earth? What would be the implications of proving that alien life exists?

Many people imagine and believe that there are living species outside of our planet. According to my belief, aliens are possible life forms in our infinite universe. However, proving their existance would bring certain consequences to our life.

In my opinion, there is a high chance that aliens exist. Since our galaxy is only a tiny part of the infinite universe, it would be falsy to think that Earth is the only planet with living creatures. Unfortunately, owing to the current technological progress, we cannot explore places that are far from the solar system. Therefore, we cannot prove their existance by finding evidences.

However, many famous scientists suggest that aliens should be out somewhere, theoretically. To support this point of view, some findings should be mentioned, such as frozen water, observed on Mars. Moreover, there are scientific theories, claiming that out planet is located on the sparse and non-central part of the universe. According to this statement, we are unable to observe the whole picture due to our planet's location.

If humans find enough evidence to prove aliens' existance, the technological progress in the domain of space exploration would be boosted. First of all, this would mean that there could be biological resources on other planets. These resources could be utilised in one way or another. For example, an Earth-like planet might provide us with extra wood, fuel and other energy sources. Secondly, in case of over-population on our planet, some people would be open for posibilities of relocatation to other planets.

To conclude, I believe in existance of alien life, even though there are no any strong evidence to think so. Proving this belief would encourage us to boost the space technology for exploration, relocation and utilisation reasons.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3321799308 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83087280365 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0666879795 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.6111111111 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332241050885 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982623767367 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641047366004 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18259842489 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774640313908 0.056905535591 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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