Nowadays, education plays a vital role in children's lives because of competitive era. While a few individuals think that education mainly includes three subjects namely, reading, writing as well as math. But, rest of the masses ponder that computer skill should add in school curriculum. I, somewhat, agree with this statement and I give my viewpoints in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, I believe that there few reasons behind my thinking but, first and foremost is that these days, pupils are facing many health related problems due to educational burden. In another words, if additional subjects include in school's syllabus, then they will not give appropriate intension towards study, and sometimes, they can be diverted from their moral path. As a result, they can achieve less marks in their final examinations. Apart from that, reading and writing are extremely helpful in every feild of life. Such as, if someone wants to become a doctor, teacher or an engineer, then he or she needs to writing and reading skills for giving his or her profession related tests. Whereas, math' skills are not only beneficial for counting or calculating something bul also helpful to get lucrative jobs in banks and other companies.
However, vital role has been played by computer . Computers are too useful for communicating with friends and other family memebers.for example, it has been proved by OX FORD UNIVERSITY that approximatly 3000 people are migrating to foreign countries form any particular natiom because of their study and work purposes in order to that if school's teachers add this skill into study, then they will easily communicate with their family memebers . Morever, teenagers are easily frastate from their study so, they need to rejuvinate their mind. If they have computer's skills, then they listen to music and refresh their mind. Which enhance the enegery level of teenagers.
To sum up, in my view of point, reading, writing and math skills are immensely beneficial in yoingster's lives along with computer skills because of modern era.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun marks is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ral path. As a result, they can achieve less marks in their final examinations. Apar...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y communicate with their family memebers . Morever, teenagers are easily frastate ...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...listen to music and refresh their mind. Which enhance the enegery level of teenagers....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, well, whereas, while, apart from, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1981981982 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60666247151 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630630630631 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.547618833 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16621589442 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516186940581 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429567958833 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114843197605 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327061733795 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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