We live today in an electronic information age. It is easier to be connected by technology yet many people seem no closer to feeling happy in t heir lives. Discuss
As the century draws to close, most people around the globe are equipped with latest gadgets and information processing systems. Although these advancements have made lives easier, this progress has not yet made the mankind happy. Therein, a paradigm shift in the usage of these modern technologies should be enforced.
Living in a fast paced world expects people to have a serene experience. Technology makes life straightforward, owing to the easy access to information, communication and better living standards. This digital transformation has helped human beings in every facets of their life such as education, transportation, trade and so on.
However, this can be erroneous for myriad reasons. For instance, in this modern era humans tend to enjoy the companionship of electronic devices rather than their same species. Moreover, this digitalised age consumes most of the peoples time on social networking sites, which always adamently provokes people to live a perfect life for showcasing ones pride to their followers . It is the irresponsible management of these advancements which drive many people into psychological traumas such as depression and anxiety disorders.
In my opinion, when people indulge themselves in technologies, they forget to spend time in solitude and to relax. This in turn creates stress and a sense of not gratified gusto. Not only these advancements keeps oneself addicted to it, but it also acts a parasite which controls their life. Furthermore, this trend is a profound reason why people does not engage in physical pursuits because of the significant reduction in manpower used up in industrial and other sectors.
As a whole, it can be concluded that technologies to a great extent can emotionally and psychologically drain a person if not carefully handled. Therefore a paradigm shift in the usage of electronic information should be adopted by individuals and society for their better functioning both intellectually and emotionally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e to live a perfect life for showcasing ones pride to their followers . It is the ir...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...showcasing ones pride to their followers . It is the irresponsible management of t...
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Line 9, column 146, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...rain a person if not carefully handled. Therefore a paradigm shift in the usage of electr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46753246753 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16719538576 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633116883117 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1764021467 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166455594686 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506964259942 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289540195664 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918633634102 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344724705884 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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