As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is clear that the foundation of a business is earning money. However, I firmly believe that companies should contribute to the social cause of the community. And this essay will discuss the reasons for the following view.
To begin with, a great deal of advocates are inclined towards the view that profit is the primary purpose of businesses. In fact, no company can survive without adequate revenue as business owners need to spend a large amount of money to pay for the company's operations including employee salary, allowances, service charges, printing fees,... For instance, if a company is well operated, employees will have a stable life, reducing unemployment and contributing to the benefit of society.
On top of that, it is undeniable that businesses need to be socially responsible as protecting the benefits of society is also protecting the benefits of corporations. To take a clear example, a company wants to save money, so it sets up its factory in a small village. However, the factory's operation negatively affects the surrounding people, including air and noise pollution. As a result, the company's reputation will decline, negatively affecting its operation. In addition, a polluted working environment will adversely impact the quality of human resources.
In conclusion, companies' primary purpose should be earning profit and taking responsibility socially.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...lowances, service charges, printing fees,... For instance, if a company is well op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4331797235 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03475028197 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626728110599 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2354664084 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127251379806 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447391507256 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495987641342 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747324604225 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200258937828 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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