As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree of disagree?
It is true that businesses have always sought to earn profits, but besides that, enterprises should have the social obligation remain a source of controversy. I believe that though generating profit is every companies' initial priority, firms need to run their business in a socially responsible way.
On the one hand, maximising profits is one of corporations' efforts to cover its running cost and bring benefits to the society. Firstly, the more profit they earn, the more tax they pay for the government. Therefore, authorities enable to spend more money for essential sectors like education, environment, and health in order to improve populations’ living standard. Secondly, thanks to generous profit, enterprises have more opportunities to develop their business and have sound financial health in a competitive world. For example, a lot of jobs created when operations expand their production.
On the other hand, there are various reasons why companies should commit social duty responsibilities. The first one is their manufacturing process sometimes harm to the ecological system. Without control, corporations' process can destroy the environment extremely by emitting waste gas or discharging wastewater, and so on. For instance, global warming and water pollution could be under control if businesses set up sewage treatment system or limit the amount of gas emitted. The next one is to gain favorable, not only big companies but also small and medium-state firms should run charity activities through the country to make a positive contribution to society and the poverty.
To sum up, despite the fact that financial objective is the sole principle of each company, they should place much importance on social obligations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48698884758 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07934621333 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665427509294 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9792841415 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154112271008 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472218022105 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491546243695 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870102604098 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472072688494 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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