As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the first aim of making business is warning profits, but also the community has rights need to be fulfilled by the business owners. I strongly, believe that there is a tight connection between the successful projects and their social background.
One of the reasons that make employers responsible for the society is how much they care about the community health and environmental health. If executives are assuring that their employees are following the safety measures, the staff will be safe and the equipments will be out of danger. The mechanism of waste disposal is another responsibility of the owners. They should be aware that the environment could be damaged by inappropriate way of waste disposal. Some activities can be considered of this awareness. For example, some factories are planting trees around the manufacturing areas to decrease air pollution. Some firms encourage their employees to decrease driving their cars by providing them with free passes to the public transportation. Another way of responsibility is the criteria of the final product. It should be an environment-friendly. The company should use less packaging or use clean sources of energy.
At the human level, there are other major responsibilities. Firstly, the employees should be covered by a sufficient health insurance. Once the workers feel that their health matters, they will be loyal to their jobs. Secondly, at time of retirement, the subordinates should receive good pensions that can cover their expenses. Thirdly, if any emergency happened to the employee, the company should support him and his family in both ways financially and socially. Finally, charity works are the easy way that businessmen can offer to the community. It is common nowadays that, famous companies are establishing associations and organizations to help the sick children and to donate for their education. For example, Starbucks, the famous coffee shops chain, is offering educational scholarships for its working staff. When the student finds that his part-time job cares for his future, he will work hard to be successful.
In conclusion, projects that succeeded in their profits, completed first their social responsibilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed first their social responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39655172414 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16111284675 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580459770115 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.860084053 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3636363636 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59090909091 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0543871847776 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0169835735373 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373364369622 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639091680959 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584373406138 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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