What are the benefits and problems of living in a big city.
Nowadays, more and more people like to live in large cities while other people think that living there is a nightmare for them. It is still an argument whether people should live in a big city or not. From my point of view, I strongly believe that living in a big city has certain advantages, but it also has some drawbacks.
It is not denied that living in a big city brings people many benefits. One clear benefit of living in a large city is that people will have a good living condition. Indeed, big cities have a lot of modern facilities and public services such as health care, education, building, and especially entertainment which helps people release stress after studying or working hard. This makes people feel more comfortable than living in the countryside which is so boring. Another benefit is that people have opportunities to develop and promote their business. In fact, business in big cities attracts domestic and international investors which provide their jobs with high income. In addition, it is easy to find a good job with a high salary because it concentrates on many big companies and factories with various positions. Hence people aren’t afraid of being unemployed when living in big cities.
However, living in a big city has several drawbacks. Firstly, a polluted environment is a major issue of living in a large city which is created by emission from vehicles and waste from factories. As a result, people have to deal with many diseases related to the respiratory system which reduce their life expectancy, even death. Furthermore, living in a large city is dangerous and lacks safety. In fact, the rate of crimes in the city is getting higher and higher in recent years. This makes people worried when living there and they have to learn how to protect themselves.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that living in a big city has both benefits and drawbacks. Personally, although living in a big city can cause some dangerous problems, I still want to live in large cities because I have opportunities to develop and promote in my job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85112359551 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66183516225 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497191011236 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0882941153 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8947368421 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397527983514 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163991832713 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10510843888 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302684197681 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576462973512 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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