what are the benefits of arts on individuals and the society?
Some people claim that science is the sole key to the growth of society while others think that arts are pivotal factors to well-developed and prosperous nations. From my point of view, arts are indubitably vital to the development of the world. This essay will explain my idea by presenting arts' benefits to individuals and society.
Arts encourage children to be active and creative. For instance, when kids draw, they will be more innovative by mixing colors and sketch whatever they want. Also, children can be free to express themselves through artworks, which means arts allow kids to have the freedom to show their feelings and emotions in a creative way. Museums, which are forms of art, provide children with great opportunities to invent questions for the objects displayed there to gain insights into the world around them, both in the past and the present. As kids receive the responses, they will acquire new knowledge and deep understandings about the world. Furthermore, arts supply children with the ability to deal with uncertainty and remain flexible thinkers, which will help them be active and adaptable individuals in the future.
Many studies have shown that arts keep people relaxed and free from their worries and sadness. People may find difficulties expressing their hardships and concerns verbally; however, when they create artworks, they can invent some proses, pictures, or songs which convey their feelings. The more they expose to arts, the less depressed they feel because the negative emotions they used to suffer are released during their meditative-like status while doing art projects. Music has a substantial role in encouraging working people to be productive and efficient. Besides, universal music tastes connect people from all over the world, therefore help eliminate the discord caused by differences among individuals.
In conclusion, arts have positive impacts on every individual's development irrespective of their ages, gender, and nationalities. Above all, arts connect people which will result in a peaceful world shared by all nations and ethnicities.
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Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40606060606 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76797904417 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1061248613 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191922574642 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684705822401 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680415669353 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137530520056 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840852634297 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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