To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of edible insects as foods. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but also affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the present scenario when the global population is increasing drastically, the food supply has been one of the greatest issues confronting the governments. In that light, there have been some suggestions that insects can be used as food. While some people consent with this idea, others oppose this because of the disadvantages insects may bring about. However, eating insects have both merits and demerits.
On the one hand, it is understandable that this practice can yield benefits. These days, states have the tendency to shift attention from developing agriculture to expanding industry and boosting technology, resulting in the scarcity of food among the population. To deal with this issue, eating insects seems to be reasonable as these food are usually available in a large number. With these new dishes invented, the hunger among citizens in some cities may be addressed successfully.
On the other hand, eating insects may have some drawbacks. Some people claim that this food can be unhygienic as insects are usually found in dirty and damp places, thus, may contain bacteria and viruses causing diseases for users. Moreover, consuming insects may have negative repercussions on nature. Humans feeding on insects can not only upset the natural food chain but also drives species eating this food to the verge of starvation. Therefore, it is justifiable that consuming insects can have negative impacts on both humans and nature.
In conclusion, though turning insects into new dishes can help meet the increasing demand for food among the global population, it can also cause diseases for humans and disturb nature.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...ating insects seems to be reasonable as these food are usually available in a large number...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30769230769 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68630099165 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542307692308 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2564419386 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27391741657 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105402386122 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620200669513 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17974894921 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629653043457 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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