What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
After the technology had been well-developed around the world, online shopping was introduced to the world citizens and gained interest among them. Nowadays, there are thought to be more people spending their money online than they did earlier. There are both positives and negatives of purchasing products via the internet. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and state a solution to promote local brands.
There may be some drawbacks to buying online goods. First of all, the consumer will have a relatively higher chance of being cheated by the seller without knowing. An online platform allows the dealer to increase their products' prices because of the cost of shipment. Moreover, the quality of products may be lower in the larger unit sales to the organization. Simply put, when customers are not able to select what they want themselves, the retailer receives more opportunities to mix some low-quality goods within the packages.
However, it is understandable why people nowadays seem to do more shopping using an online platform because of its advantages. The first one is it provides convenience to the customer for not having to go out as what they do in the conventional way of shopping. Delivery service is an obvious instance, that depicts this point. Furthermore, most online retailers are gathered in one location. The online dealing applications, such as Amazon, and FedEx, allow each private supplier to promote their items with a promotional code that benefits both buyer and seller.
In summary, the benefits that online shopping provides contribute to an increase in the number of shoppers who make an online purchase. There might be some disadvantages to buying what you need via the internet platform, however, the convenience and other advantages can outweigh the point. The progress of online shopping can also be done to encourage customers to consume products from locals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, well, in summary, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24509803922 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77478693274 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591503267974 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5656223734 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4117647059 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409379668005 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107362131946 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626708421408 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233616068029 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837122406581 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.