in what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
In these days, the technology has a pivotal role in people’s life, specialy in their relationships with each other and in different areas. This essay consists some information about how technology effect on people’s relationships.
To begin with, the technology make people to be closer to each other. To illustrate, they are able to contact to their friends and family anywhere and anytime they decide. Some of the special ways, which the technology origines them, that people can utilize to have easier connection togather are social media. All the people can use the social media to conect easily to their family and relatives ever if they are live in other city or country. For instance, I have some experience of using the technology to be connected with my relatives. My family are originaly from another city and when I want to call them, I just use social media; because it is cheaper and I can use my laptob or another device even I do not have my cell-phone around.
The second impact of the technology on people’s relationship is that, they can communicate with all the people around the globe and make a new relationship. To addition, they can widespread their connection and it can be very beneficial in different ways; like for their career or for special group of people like tourists.
According to former paragraph, I, personally, believe the technology is dreadful more than society can sense. It improved the quality of life and level of the people’s social behavior. Accordingly, this social behavior and connection with using the technology can improve people’s bussines connection and help them to grow. Thus, I think, the technology is beneficial and has positive impact on different relationship.
In conclusion, the technology can keep families and friends closer and improve the life quality of the society. In one word, it can make the globe to one community in different locations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, second, so, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05660377358 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85046544921 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48427672956 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8564847691 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219620363248 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949357171634 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078680478464 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147963677171 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478247055171 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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