When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are has been considerable debate among people over whether the most essential consideration when picking a job is the salary. In my opinion, while I agree with the former, I also believe that other factors are equally necessary.
On the one hand, having a good salary has many advantages. Firstly, money helps people pay for their living. Indeed, wages help people pay living expenses such as housing, food, health care and so on. if people do not have money, they cannot pay cost of them or their family. Secondly, the salary create motivate which help people to try harder. if people have low salary, they will try their best to work to get more money. when people work hard which will increase their company profits, contribute to economic development of their country.
On the onther hand, I believe that other considerations are just essential as salary as in our jobs. To begin with, personal relationship also important when choosing a job. if people have a good relationship with their fellowship, they will receive many helping hands when they have a trouble. For instance, people who is not friendly and help anyone will be isolated in their workplace. Additionally, the accumulation of work experience also necessary. This is because skills which are studies when working not only have advantages over career but also apply for daily life.
In conclusion, although I believe the salary is important when deciding a job, I disagree with money is the most essential factor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04016064257 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62651216486 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6950262697 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.4375 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162544767207 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610122289783 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811565613653 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140776251276 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896465334275 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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