Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree ?
there has been a considerable debate among people over whether even though read news on the internet become popular with many people, newspapers will keep the most vital source of news. I disagree with this idea because both me methods come with several benefits and are equally rewarding.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why newspapers will continue to be an important source of information. Firstly, many people do not like reads on the internet or they do not enough money to buy a smartphone which helps them access the internet. For example, old people or people who live in a rural area usually like the traditional press more than online news in that they might not have the ability or do not know access on the internet. Secondly, the information on newspapers is usually more reliable because they are checked carefully by editors and journalists before publishing.
However, I also believe that the internet is likely as popular as newspapers because of the diversity of reasons. To begin with, read news on the internet are more convenient and faster than the traditional newspapers. If you have a smartphone which is accessed wifi, you can read much news anywhere or anytime. Additionally, using the internet to read information can help protect the environment. this is because when the reader does not read newspapers, trees will do not be cut down to newspaper production which will do not harm the environment.
In conclusion, I disagree that newspapers are the main source of news, while I also believe that the internet will become as vital as the traditional press
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9405204461 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72251983656 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524163568773 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1649389807 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.459030441056 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157942477936 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779847746795 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275224955786 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337049314471 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.