Cycling is healthier and environmentally friendly form of transport. Nevertheless, cycling is getting less popular. What are the reasons of this trend? What can be done to make cycling more popular?
Although riding a bike is healthier and environmentally friendly type of transport, it is becoming less attractive. this problem is caused by some factors and it should be dealt with by some effective remedies.
Cycling is becoming less popular which is caused by several contributors. The first factor is that riding a bike is slower than other transports which can make a difficult for people in some cases. For example, when students get up late, they need transport that can help them to go to school as fast as possible. Another contributor is that some countries do not have the road for bikers. Therefore, some people do not use a bicycle as a way to protect themselves.
there are two main measures for this problem. The first solution is that people can invent a bicycle which is faster than current bicycle. The invention not only encourages people to use the bicycle but also help to tackle the time problem when people use the bicycle. For instance, in recent years, an electric bicycle becomes popular for people. this product not only runs as quick as a motorbike but also is very environmentally friendly. The second remedy is that the government in some countries should provide funding for building the road that intended for a biker. this is help bike travel becomes easier and safer. Moreover, having road for biker also encourage people to use more bicycle when they go out.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why people do not use the bicycle too much and several effects to the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87692307692 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61091246604 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511538461538 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6073109678 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.25 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140417687925 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524069169154 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601498934635 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914238358783 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516795147405 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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