The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent you agree or disagree?
There has been a matter of concern among people over whether the most method to decrease teenager crimes is to teach their parents with parental skills. In my opinion, while I agree with the former, I also believe that other ways come with several benefits and are equally rewarding.
On the one hand, parents are the closest people to children and more likely to have an impact on children’s behaviour. Indeed a number of youth crimes nowadays are result of inappropriate child rearing. Many parents are usually indulgent kids and lack of crime education. if parents can improve their skills about crime, they can educate their children better. it is help reduce in juvenile offences.
On the other hand, I believe that other methods are as feasible as educate parents. To begin with, school need to increase education about crime for students. this is because, nowadays children spend the largest amount of time at school, so they can be influenced by their teachers and friends. For example, in my home country, high school students are usually susceptible to bad behaviour of their friends. Therefore, if students be educated carefully about crime skills, they can aware of poor behaviours better and avoid it. Additionally children also need self-awareness about their action. this is because, if youth people cannot dominate about themselves, the instruction of parents and school will not effective. For instance, in Vietnam some childrens who is taught carefully, still become dangerous criminals.
In conclusion, even though I believe enhance parents skills on crime educate kids is good way to diminish adolescence crime, I disagree with that is the best method.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26199261993 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67842288604 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3067537258 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366552763146 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110631039343 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865111646224 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25112328398 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654048319246 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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