The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent you agree or disagree?
It is true that there has been a dramatic increase in crime among young adults. While it is often argued that juvenile crimes can only reduce by teaching their parents with parental skills, I completely disagree with this viewpoint.
On the one hand, providing parents with knowledge about how to bring up youngsters can exert influence upon the decline of youth crimes to a certain extent. The main reason is that parents are closest people to their sons and daughters since their birthday. Moreover, the major reason of committing crime is attributed to inappropriate child rearing.
On the other hand, education at home is not enough since children are not unwilling to listen to their parents’ advises. To be more specific, children in Vietnam spend most of their time at school, which means that they are susceptible to negative peer pressure such as drinking alcohol, beer and these factors play a vital role in juvenile offending. Furthermore, there are also many ways of decreasing youth crimes besides educating parents with parental skills. The simple solution would be to add more knowledge related to effects of crime to the school curriculum. The most effective measure would be to invite ex-prisoners to talk to teenagers about the criminal lifestyle as they are more likely to speak from their experiences and dispel any wrong ideas.
In conclusion, while educating parents about skills can somehow have profound impacts on reducing juvenile deliquencies, the best way is to mix measures mentioned above to practice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19277108434 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69431522411 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626506024096 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5816404972 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.545454545 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420777667009 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152417432708 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137655398539 0.0667982634062 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245871561602 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547247967959 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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