Without capital punishment (the dealt penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Throughout the years, the issue of Death Penalty had always been present in our society. Many organizations stated facts and assumptions as to the extent of its essence in our society regarding security and crime regulation. The use of capital punishment depends on factors. First, the geological location; second, a nation type of government and lastly, the possible effect or its implication to our society.
Safety of one's belongings, including life, a family member, acquaintance is a top priority in Maslow's Hierarchy of needs. This part study could be easily taken away from an individual due to rise of crimes devised by people who likes to do it the easy way and Capital Punishment was the method used by ancient humans with high profile crimes such as murder, rape, and robbery. It proved to be effective until the rise of the law. Still some countries permit this act such as the Muslim countries that added illegal drug activities to the equation. This was also used in the Philippines in late 1990's where the most common convicts were rapists, a person named "Baby Ama" was trending then who raped his step daughter. Many more were punished and boy did it felt so right to the families of the afflicted.
Faith, justice and equality; the three top ruling reasons for eviction of this law. It is stated in the fifth commandment "Thou shall not kill". Religiously, this means that it is not up to humans to take it upon themselves to end one's life, but up to God the creator. There are instances where forgiveness took place yet a better substitute for death penalty to their eyes was imprisonment. Aggravation or years served in jail depends on crime committed and seems more ethical to many.
As I have seen on periodicals, news and my own eyes as I was a victim of robbery myself; serious implementation of the law must be done based from case to case. In my opinion, those who had the courage to kill a person, a group and done something hineous such as rape deserves to die as to it will not only be instilled as a lesson for those who want to commit such, it will also be a source of feeling safe by the individuals because there is "one less" that could scare them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, regarding, second, so, still, then, as to, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73195876289 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68736706795 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9970161333 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8235294118 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151412018661 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046341047346 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525104173367 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901387556077 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656954088796 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.