women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men’s, although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career. It is said: “A woman’s place is in the home.” What do you think?
Although women and men had different roles in the community at the very beginning of the world, these differences are slowly converging today. However, in many societies, women do not be given proper appreciation and even are receiving discriminations.
Firstly, I must admit that men are undoubtedly better to do physical tasks because of genetic inheritance. Therefore, the assumption that women can match men in everything is clearly flawed. This also the reason people are divided by gender in sports events. However, with the development of technology, the physical demanding professions are decreasing dramatically in the modern world so the impact from due to inherent differences between the sexes also goes down. Women play the same roles which are as important as those of men in workplaces. Seen the light of this, it is therefore clear that women are gaining the equal position to men.
On the other hand, the statement that women are less appreciated in society due to their traditional roles in the home is true to a certain extent. This is because in some traditional countries, like those in Mid-East and Africa, in general, women are still allowed to do little else but stay at home, being a housewife. Consequently, a woman’s value is largely dictated by society, culture, and history. Thus, in those countries, women are owned by many appreciations.
In conclusion, differences and discriminations do certainly exist, however, the roles women deserve is giving to them gradually.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30165289256 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05938369016 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603305785124 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4053422503 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253283073825 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864137010809 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565524548394 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139554989297 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531404708005 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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